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Todd Wilkerson's avatar

Fantastic, as always.

Jimmy Doom's avatar

Thanks. It meant something to me to get this one right.

Todd Wilkerson's avatar

I love the worlds you create that allows me to briefly pause the current reality.

Luke DeLalio's avatar

Excellent. Excellent.

Jimmy Doom's avatar

Thanks. I try to make em worth reading.

Luke DeLalio's avatar

Totally worth it. Just when I’ve had it up to my eyebrows with all the Ai shit. What a pleasure to read something so well written, with a sense of pace and rhythm, and an ebb and flow of detail and drama. Kudos.

Paul R's avatar

How do we know what is true?

Perhaps only if we were there?

I'd hate to serve on a jury .

Jimmy Doom's avatar

Kids under pressure aren’t great liars. Kids who tried to do the right thing are usually pretty straightforward. I almost got convicted of assault with intent to murder because I had touched a knife. An off duty cop who was a prosecution witness told the court I threw the knife away from the scene, which was what I had been saying since the night of the arrest. Not guilty.