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Great!
Thanks!
This is just great. "For the first time I tell him, "No."
Quintessential Jimmy Doom. Bookmark for the next anthology.
Funny, because when I wrote that last line I did think “this sounds a fuck of a lot like me.” Guess I met my voice in the mirror. And you know I’m happy you like it.
I liked that line, too. Very voice of Doom.
This is so human it’s just broken my heart, J.
Not for his paralysis but for his yearning.
Yeah, the paralysis is just a passenger. It’s not the character.
I was wondering where the bullet went. It pulled everything together.
Great!
Thanks!
This is just great. "For the first time I tell him, "No."
Quintessential Jimmy Doom. Bookmark for the next anthology.
Funny, because when I wrote that last line I did think “this sounds a fuck of a lot like me.” Guess I met my voice in the mirror. And you know I’m happy you like it.
I liked that line, too. Very voice of Doom.
This is so human it’s just broken my heart, J.
Not for his paralysis but for his yearning.
Yeah, the paralysis is just a passenger. It’s not the character.
I was wondering where the bullet went. It pulled everything together.