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Patris's avatar

Ulysses was restless too.

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Janet Martin's avatar

Aw, that’s a shame.

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Joe's avatar

Ain't that the truth.

Everyone thinks road work is glamorous, but they don't see all the behind the scenes stuff.

Probably why guys just suddenly don't get on the bus one day...

Everyone has dreams.

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Jim Cummings's avatar

The last two lines are killer.

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lou J's avatar

I say this often enough it may be losing impact or validity, but that was one of my favorites yet. As you might expect, part of the joy is that you clearly live a different lifestyle than me. To be clear, I LOVE the choices I've made, but my world is pretty sedate and predictable compared to these folk/that guy/so many of the characters in your story. Your stories/this story makes it wildly easy to imagine myself in other shoes.

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Jimmy Doom's avatar

Thanks Lou! I love that the work spurs your imagination

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lou J's avatar

So frustrating to just get one life. I don’t believe in the afterlife or reincarnation beyond mere recycling of minerals, but I do like being able to live vicariously and am pretty damned good at it, especially w concise fodder like that you provide.

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J.E. Petersen's avatar

Bruh this story's too real.

"No thank you."

Can I get the rose-colored version next time?

Thank you.

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Ken's avatar

That hits hard.

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Jimmy Doom's avatar

I’m trying to write meaningful stuff

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Ken's avatar

I know you are. I exist with one foot in that world - and this one catches that energy.

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Paul R's avatar

She emails me back.

“No thank you.”

I can imagine the feelings. You have already visualised a positive response and how you would react, but try to keep your hopes in check. You knew that the answer would probably be ‘no’, like all the other times. And then bingo!

There it is.

Again.

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