Jimmy Doom's Roulette Weal

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A Basic Wish

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Oct 26, 2022
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A middle finger poking out of a black coat sleeve drawing a smiley face on a snowy window

The frigid aluminum siding felt good against his head at first.

After a time, he didn’t know how long, it was so cold it began to hurt.

Marty Bonner hadn’t thought to bring a hat.

He really, in his heart, just wanted to say hi.

He knew that probably wasn’t very believable.

But really, all he wanted was to see Jill Elliot, say hi, and leave.

They wouldn’t let him in the party.

He was going to say hi to Jill, then turn around and walk home.

Simple.

Andy Carter slammed the door to Bryan Silewicz’s parent’s house, and Marty had to jump back, because he knew, he could feel, he could remember other stories, where someone tried to force their way into a party and got beat up.

Marty didn’t want that.

He just wanted to say hi.

He walked four miles, maybe more, to Bryan Silewicz’s party, just to say hi to Jill Elliot.

He didn’t want to walk home without saying hi.

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