Jimmy Doom's Roulette Weal

Jimmy Doom's Roulette Weal

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Jimmy Doom's Roulette Weal
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Monitors

Monitors

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Feb 02, 2023
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The girl was a northerner, Walt DuVane knew before she even handed over her ID, he could just tell, always could. She had a troubled, impatient look about her. 

Not a tweaker’s impatience, he could smell that, did his best not to rent ‘em rooms.

Attractive girl, she was, looked like the world had beat her down a bit, snatched a little beauty and run off with it like the gremlin they claimed lived in Roster Pond.

Felt bad askin’ her if she was a pro, didn’t usually feel bad ‘bout that. 

That was Smirk’s orders. 

“Warn ‘em first that it’s an extra charge.”

Girl wasn’t a pro, weren’t expecting no Tinder date, nothing. 

She wasn’t on vacation, whatever she was doing. 

Walt was tired, wanted a drink. Girl probably did too. 

She’d be happy when he told her that the Coke machine at the Rocky Valley Motor Lodge could provide that for her.

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