Nice tension, Jimmy. Casinos make me feel cold and a little sick with the desperation that permeates, but I used to love going to the track on Dequindre. Go figure.
Track is different because you gotta wait for the horses and drivers/jockeys to be ready. 12-15 races. Finite. People can yank or tap on slots all day and night long
Must be my good mood or something because my funny bone got so much tickling on my way through this, not because anything’s funny really, but because you are such a wizard for detail. And then, just like that, I too want to push someone in front of a bus and buy a winning ticket for someone else.
If you walk em down a bit that seems to loosen ‘em up. But I’m not much of a slot guy. I just hit the slots to give my mind a break between rounds of roulette.
Good one. Nice tension build. Chickie needs to trip over a curb.
Thanks. Working on tension building as I get closer to another push on the novel.
C’mon, Pete!
it!'s got your name all over it this one. Thanks Jimmy. 😎
Nice tension, Jimmy. Casinos make me feel cold and a little sick with the desperation that permeates, but I used to love going to the track on Dequindre. Go figure.
Track is different because you gotta wait for the horses and drivers/jockeys to be ready. 12-15 races. Finite. People can yank or tap on slots all day and night long
Must be my good mood or something because my funny bone got so much tickling on my way through this, not because anything’s funny really, but because you are such a wizard for detail. And then, just like that, I too want to push someone in front of a bus and buy a winning ticket for someone else.
I’m happy when someone is laughing. Thanks Lou!
Max bet is the only way to fly
If you walk em down a bit that seems to loosen ‘em up. But I’m not much of a slot guy. I just hit the slots to give my mind a break between rounds of roulette.
The outcome is determined before the wheels start to spin.
Nice one, Jimmy. It's already been said but I concur, good tension building and well developed characters.
Thanks. Working on pulling the tension wires a little tighter in most of my stuff.