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Brett needs to realize that his voice matters. Not just when he’s in character.

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I ran out of breath just reading this one.

The 'Selbyan' (new one on me) run ons were perfect.

In my mind, I was hearing the dramatic (almost insane) voice in the finale of "Casey at the Bat".

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I loved this. A peek into the racing mind. Breathless and exhausting, as heartbreak usually is.

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So many good lines.

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One of the things I really enjoy about reading Edgar Allan Poe is the rhythm he brings to his works. The way he gets you all caught up in breathing a certain way you don't realize it until it's too late.

And Disco here ya go Jimmy. You have done just that. No easy feat.

I just about stood up with the audience, clapped, and shouted a bravo.

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"Two buckets of dialogue in a Dixie cup head" was my favorite line. Loved this one!

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That paragraph about the cast “bringing it” was pure gold. What a rush!

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