8 Comments
User's avatar
Patty Mallett's avatar

Eerie. Good read.

Expand full comment
Beevil's avatar

Ooo that was enticing

Expand full comment
Germaine Gebhard's avatar

We…both know what he was…looking for…

Expand full comment
Jimmy Doom's avatar

What…was…he looking for?

Expand full comment
Germaine Gebhard's avatar

A friend to call his own, to never feel alone, perhaps a rat named Ben.

Expand full comment
Jimmy Doom's avatar

I don’t get very many Michael Jackson reference comments on my stories. Lots of Tito, but not Michael

Expand full comment
Patris's avatar

Spellbinding Was trekking along with him to the King Rat.. was hoping whoever’s voice it was would tell him he was Mr. Rat, King of the Alley. Your ending was more horribly better.

Expand full comment
Joe's avatar

Good one.

Great ending!

Expand full comment