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Jul 11, 2021Liked by Jimmy Doom

I love the ending!

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It made me laugh even though I wrote it and knew it was coming.

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I can see why

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Awesome. And for the record, my childhood nickname was Bacon.

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Did you write about that? Did I inadvertently plagiarize your childhood?

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I don’t think I’ve written about in anything published. But even if I had, I’d say that falls under ‘steal like an artist’ and is therefore permitted. To be clear, I have no problem with it either way.

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Jul 11, 2021Liked by Jimmy Doom

“…for it is your doom that your parents will never know you.”

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I don't think Clark knows anyone but himself.

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loved the "little vermouth of real sympathy / perpetual vodka pleasantnes" line

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Bryan’s off to a good start.

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Jul 13, 2021Liked by Jimmy Doom

The metaphors in this were rad and I got a real good chuckle at the end.

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I love making people laugh. I know I lean darker on here, but I really do try to lighten it up sometimes. Maybe I'll try again tonight. No promises.

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