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Nickolas's avatar

Good stuff about bad stuff, man.

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Jimmy Doom's avatar

Thank you. A thin slice came from my own life

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Patris's avatar

Some Spillane, some my uncle Jimmy. Dark, sharp, and very smart. Great character, J.

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Jimmy Doom's avatar

I will take a Spillane reference, thank you.

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Jonah Town's avatar

Your ability to capture the complexities of human experience is commendable! It's a reminder of how circumstances can change in an instant and how even the strongest among us can fall. Truly powerful writing!

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Jimmy Doom's avatar

You can do this too, ya know. You have to peel some layers back, expose some skin and sometimes even some veins

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Zelmo of Troy's avatar

Excellent.

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Jimmy Doom's avatar

Thank you. It made my head a little dark.

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Luke's avatar

Nice one, Jimmy.

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Jimmy Doom's avatar

Thanks Luke. Someday I'll show you the place that inspired it. The building is an MSU annex now, near the medical center

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Joe's avatar

At 22 we still think we're immortal.

Some learn early and some hard.

The debt can only be paid upon death and the scars have no erase button.

Good writing, Jimmy!

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Jimmy Doom's avatar

I really did dodge the reaper on a few occasions.

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Patty Mallett's avatar

Nice, Jimmy.

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Jimmy Doom's avatar

Thanks Patty. I felt that one hard. I feel em all, but that one was taking chunks out.

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Holly Starley's avatar

Another terrific story, Jimmy!

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Jimmy Doom's avatar

Thanks Holly! I'm trying to keep you all entertained.

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Holly Starley's avatar

Nailing it.

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Jimmy Doom's avatar

Thanks

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Carol Angel's avatar

Oh we are entertained! You were in there, could feel it…down one of those alleys that lead to all kinds of souls. Thank you

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Jimmy Doom's avatar

Thanks Carol! Thank you for always sticking with me

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V Moire's avatar

I could just see it. I felt invincible too, working in those clubs at that age. I had a generous pinch of caution and ambition that kept me from going too far astray. The lure was addictive and intoxicating. I had to quit the life cold turkey.

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Jimmy Doom's avatar

Cold turkey is really the only way. Walk out on your own or leave in a bag.

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