Your ability to capture the complexities of human experience is commendable! It's a reminder of how circumstances can change in an instant and how even the strongest among us can fall. Truly powerful writing!
I could just see it. I felt invincible too, working in those clubs at that age. I had a generous pinch of caution and ambition that kept me from going too far astray. The lure was addictive and intoxicating. I had to quit the life cold turkey.
Good stuff about bad stuff, man.
Thank you. A thin slice came from my own life
Some Spillane, some my uncle Jimmy. Dark, sharp, and very smart. Great character, J.
I will take a Spillane reference, thank you.
Your ability to capture the complexities of human experience is commendable! It's a reminder of how circumstances can change in an instant and how even the strongest among us can fall. Truly powerful writing!
You can do this too, ya know. You have to peel some layers back, expose some skin and sometimes even some veins
Excellent.
Thank you. It made my head a little dark.
Nice one, Jimmy.
Thanks Luke. Someday I'll show you the place that inspired it. The building is an MSU annex now, near the medical center
At 22 we still think we're immortal.
Some learn early and some hard.
The debt can only be paid upon death and the scars have no erase button.
Good writing, Jimmy!
I really did dodge the reaper on a few occasions.
Nice, Jimmy.
Thanks Patty. I felt that one hard. I feel em all, but that one was taking chunks out.
Another terrific story, Jimmy!
Thanks Holly! I'm trying to keep you all entertained.
Nailing it.
Thanks
Oh we are entertained! You were in there, could feel it…down one of those alleys that lead to all kinds of souls. Thank you
Thanks Carol! Thank you for always sticking with me
I could just see it. I felt invincible too, working in those clubs at that age. I had a generous pinch of caution and ambition that kept me from going too far astray. The lure was addictive and intoxicating. I had to quit the life cold turkey.
Cold turkey is really the only way. Walk out on your own or leave in a bag.