The thing about divulging his crime would be that the reader would decide there if it was forgiveable, as opposed to thinking about another injured human being regardless. Or maybe you don't need to root for Bergren, you can cheer a woman who would wander the ice in the dark to help a stranger.
Bergren’s an optimist. Not to mention a romantic…
Except about his teeth
Some things you’ve got to take as a life lesson, and roll with it.
Fortunately I've never been handcuffed to a hospital bef
Am glad.
Poor Bergren. I suspect no one had ever showed him compassion, and now he wouldn’t even be able to thank her or pleasure himself with her memory.
Poor Bergren. I wonder what he had done wrong?
The thing about divulging his crime would be that the reader would decide there if it was forgiveable, as opposed to thinking about another injured human being regardless. Or maybe you don't need to root for Bergren, you can cheer a woman who would wander the ice in the dark to help a stranger.
“Or maybe you don't need to root for Bergren, you can cheer a woman who would wander the ice in the dark to help a stranger”
You are right!
Dayum. The title got me. Did not disappoint.
Thanks Lorraine. Sometimes I agonize about titles. That one was easy.
It seems to pay off. The names too. 👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻
I'm thrilled my core readers love it. New ones sure aren't lining up though.
It's a process. You're doing great. I truly feel you'll find the format that will get your writing more visibility. It's all about visibility.
Love it, as usual. And I got the answer for you! BOOK TUBE! I just did it. These stories would be great!
An interesting slice of (an unfortunate) life. You give good story, Jimmy.
This is a neighborhood story that probably happens every Saturday night somewhere. Not so sure about the woman.
Enjoyed
"Zug Island sunset shards of calcium"
❤️❤️❤️
Never saw the "excitement" about being drunk and fighting.
I'll take your word for it.
Great story as always. Glad you made it out.
Wickedly visceral prose!