A few paragraphs in and I realized there would be a convergence.
I was guessing the cinnamon candy canes were going to be the commonality.
Of course, you did me better!
My question: Did you consider this story and write it or did you visualize it and then break it up in pieces? I ask because it's very interesting how we get a little piece of each character, bouncing each back and forth until the convergence in the finale. There seems a tremendous amount of thought and work into getting the cadence correct on this one.
I worked as a cook in a bar once. This story reminds me of it. It's great, very descriptive.
Did Bertie clock Tucker???
Reader interpretation.
Did Sarah catch him shoplifting and he ran and slipped?
The smack on the back of his head says so I think..
I want Molly to marry Bertie.
Wonderfully cryptic, Jimmy, as usual. Well done!
Lots of stories in this story. Lots to think about.
A few paragraphs in and I realized there would be a convergence.
I was guessing the cinnamon candy canes were going to be the commonality.
Of course, you did me better!
My question: Did you consider this story and write it or did you visualize it and then break it up in pieces? I ask because it's very interesting how we get a little piece of each character, bouncing each back and forth until the convergence in the finale. There seems a tremendous amount of thought and work into getting the cadence correct on this one.
Excellent as always!
Oooo I was so hooked and then it ended.
They all have to end. Glad I hooked ya though
Storytelling that hooks you from the start and never lets you go. Gonna be thinking about this one for days.
Thank you. That's all I can ever ask is that people think about them.