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KD Dolejsi's avatar

I’m glad Elena got away and Kansas isn’t the world but it’s not a bad trip

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Jimmy Doom's avatar

I really feel like there's a ton of hope in this story.

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Adam's avatar

Great read.

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Jimmy Doom's avatar

Thanks. I really like that story. I mean, it's in my top ten

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David's avatar

really enjoyed this

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Jimmy Doom's avatar

Thanks. It was a fun world to get into.

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V. C. Ackerman's avatar

Poor Chipper. Life isn’t fair. He’s still young though, so many he could make something of himself someday.

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Jimmy Doom's avatar

If life was fair fiction would be more difficult to write.

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V. C. Ackerman's avatar

Very true.

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William Juntunen's avatar

Damn. Jimmy Doom. Master of the American grotesque!

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James Ron's avatar

Mighty fine!

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Jimmy Doom's avatar

Now ya gotta pick one at random

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Frances Ruth Harris's avatar

Thank you! What a wonderful story!

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Jimmy Doom's avatar

Really happy you like it. There are over 1000 more on my Substack.

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Weston Parker's avatar

Good writing. Thanks

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Jimmy Doom's avatar

Thanks Weston. This was written a few years back. Hopefully they're getting even better.

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Shonny Constant's avatar

This one has long been my favorite. Revisiting didn’t disappoint. Your mention of scripting some of your stories drew me back to it.

Emotionally challenging.

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