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Justin Deming's avatar

I enjoyed the story, Jimmy, especially the dialogue between the characters. And that sounds like a fair deal to me!

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Jimmy Doom's avatar

Writing dialogue is my favorite part. Kids seem to be getting their way now. I like that at least Rachelle offers something in return.

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Melissa Walsh's avatar

I love this kid!

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Jimmy Doom's avatar

I do too. I kinda wish I could write a space adventure on these pages.

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Todd Wilkerson's avatar

She’s a warrior fighting for what she wants…she’s the heroine in her own renderings possibly

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