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Paul R's avatar

I wonder how you know when to end the story? We can create our own endings, but part of me wants no loose ends !

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Jimmy Doom's avatar

This one could get another look. I just wanted to mess with who people were rooting for. But I can Rashomon this or otherwise give it more of a curtain drop

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Patris's avatar

A little freaked out, J.

This needs a sequel.

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Jimmy Doom's avatar

Ok, I’ll Rashomon it or something

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Patris's avatar

👌🏼

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Patty Mallett's avatar

Truly intriguing. What happens to him? What happens to Smoke?

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Jimmy Doom's avatar

They gotta arrest a bank robber , right? So what do they do about the snake? And, more importantly, I think I wrote a story where you actually care about the venomous snake. He’s far from the villain of the story

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Karlyn's avatar

I def care about the snake.

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Joe's avatar

Now THAT'S a story!

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lou J's avatar

I love the Tennessee cops talking to Detroit cops, have to check a my cuz about that.

Always wanted a pet snake. Can’t believe I never have.

Was astonished to see a garter-type snake with a large banana slug in its mouth sideways the other day. Made its fave shape like a Cobra and, for a moment, with no lenses on, I thought I ran into a Cobra in the NW rainforest.

I hope he gets a reason and chance to inject the anti-v.

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Rian Greeff's avatar

As long as Smoke doesn't escape down the toilet, it should all end up ok.

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