This hits home: the fever state, the not wanting to come back, the love and concern of a partner. Just fascinating and intriguing writing. Like Patris I thought maybe they both died…or maybe a unique viral/bacterial strain that literally brings you to a completely different dimension. Regardless, this story had me totally engrossed!
It’s really just about enjoying the ride under imperfect circumstances and being open to unfamiliar experiences having positives. After what you’ve gone through I’m thrilled you like the story.
I'm under the impression that both people had near death experiences and your link and comments on your own Facebook page only further this impression. I know from being Facebook friends with you that you have lost a lot of close friends recently and even if you don't want to say so directly the subconscious mind screams out what we are really thinking. In any event another great one! I just hope that my good friend Aaron Sizemore and my two wives and all the pets we had are in the place you describe. I have many friends who have gone there. None came back to tell me anything about it. Your description makes it sound pretty cool!
Just sensational, Jimmy. Just what the doctor ordered 📈
Thanks Paul. I’m really happy with the way this one turned out
They died together didn’t they
You are allowed to interpret it however you would like. That’s not how I saw it but I could easily see that angle of it
Will revisit…
I knew there would be multiple interpretations and I love that
I think I've been there.
I’ve been to a few islands in that stream
This one hits heavy on several levels for me. Brilliant, but damn!
A fever you want to catch... interesting premise and delivered with your usual subtle skills. but now i want pork scratchings...
Good one.
This hits home: the fever state, the not wanting to come back, the love and concern of a partner. Just fascinating and intriguing writing. Like Patris I thought maybe they both died…or maybe a unique viral/bacterial strain that literally brings you to a completely different dimension. Regardless, this story had me totally engrossed!
It’s really just about enjoying the ride under imperfect circumstances and being open to unfamiliar experiences having positives. After what you’ve gone through I’m thrilled you like the story.
Now THAT was a story!
It was fun to let those two take me on a ride
Sizzling sound of Velcro. Nice
It’s such a recognizable sound. It’s underrated as far as noises go
I'm under the impression that both people had near death experiences and your link and comments on your own Facebook page only further this impression. I know from being Facebook friends with you that you have lost a lot of close friends recently and even if you don't want to say so directly the subconscious mind screams out what we are really thinking. In any event another great one! I just hope that my good friend Aaron Sizemore and my two wives and all the pets we had are in the place you describe. I have many friends who have gone there. None came back to tell me anything about it. Your description makes it sound pretty cool!
It’s definitely a place people (at least Brooke) prefers to this plane of existence
A color you could literally smell! Nice!