This short story is a gripping glimpse into the complexities of memory and the impact it can have on our lives. Kay's vivid recollection of her third-grade crush and the haunting connection to Blake's troubled family history create a palpable sense of suspense and unease. It's a reminder that our past experiences, no matter how distant, can shape our perceptions and decisions in unexpected ways. Kudos to the author for crafting such an engaging narrative in such a concise format! 👏📖
A great reminder sometimes it's better to be content with what we already have in hand.
Another winner of a story.
Great run, Jimmy!
Blake is back! What a great sequel! Encore! Encore!
What’s the earlier story he was in?
https://jimmydoom.substack.com/p/toothless
Jimmy sent the link. Enjoy!
Next time let them meet. In the name of the Detroit Lions, amen.
The plot thickens... like a shoelace encrusted with maple syrup or an artery congealing with pork fat...
Someone thought Blake was beautiful. But, she was still more interested in his brother
Nice. Always like the other point of view.
Could someone point me to the first half of the story? Thanks!
https://jimmydoom.substack.com/p/toothless
It's not the first half, it's the same story from a different point of view
Great, thank you!
This short story is a gripping glimpse into the complexities of memory and the impact it can have on our lives. Kay's vivid recollection of her third-grade crush and the haunting connection to Blake's troubled family history create a palpable sense of suspense and unease. It's a reminder that our past experiences, no matter how distant, can shape our perceptions and decisions in unexpected ways. Kudos to the author for crafting such an engaging narrative in such a concise format! 👏📖
Thanks, Jonah. Glad the suspense came through.