If I would've known what it was about, I would've skipped it. But I don't mind. It hit way too close to home, brought tears of memory, so yeah, it works.
The portrayal of Leili's desperate attempts to reach Maurice and the palpable relief when she finally hears his voice are incredibly powerful. Moreover, you skillfully weave in subtle details and interactions that add depth to the narrative, such as Fauna's quiet support and Maurice's concern about Fauna's pregnancy amidst the chaos. Great work!
Very powerful Doom. I don't know if it's because I just woke up, but, the beginning of this made very anxious, and then when Leili found out everything was good, I shed tears of joy. Well done sir.
Lightning crashes right here. Heart in my throat from the beginning.
Wow
If I would've known what it was about, I would've skipped it. But I don't mind. It hit way too close to home, brought tears of memory, so yeah, it works.
Is the fact that Lelli is good or bad?
Leili.
Leili is ... pregnant ? good or bad?
I think that must be what you mean. Let me know. I have an answer
What an ending.
Your genius shines again.
Great story, Jimmy!
The portrayal of Leili's desperate attempts to reach Maurice and the palpable relief when she finally hears his voice are incredibly powerful. Moreover, you skillfully weave in subtle details and interactions that add depth to the narrative, such as Fauna's quiet support and Maurice's concern about Fauna's pregnancy amidst the chaos. Great work!
Very powerful Doom. I don't know if it's because I just woke up, but, the beginning of this made very anxious, and then when Leili found out everything was good, I shed tears of joy. Well done sir.