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Kate's avatar

Great story.i myself have never been arrested. But I have been questioned by cops before. It's.. disturbing. I have mixed feelings about law enforcement.

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Jimmy Doom's avatar

I think even the " Back the Blue" types with the bumper stickers really have mixed feelings

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Carol Angel's avatar

Vallejo, was in a different realm. Was the cop laughing, I doubt it. By the time he sobers up, this arrest will all be a dream except for bail...not my alley but love your characters❤️

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Jimmy Doom's avatar

Cops laugh at people. They really do. I'm sure it relieves street stress. I've been arrested dozens of times. I've seen them laugh. Vallejo is bombed though

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Patris's avatar

Good bombed is good. I know.

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Patris's avatar

Vallejo is happy, isn’t he, regardless of the street, the cops, the zip ties. Genies aren’t in those bottles he drinks from, but they may as well be.

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Jimmy Doom's avatar

I think he's generally happy, believes in himself, cares.

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Patris's avatar

He’s hard not to like. A lot.

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Jimmy Doom's avatar

Clifford is an homage to my drummer Cliff who cowrote our opening song with me and drank himself to death. So that must mean there's a lot of me in Vallejo

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Patris's avatar

I’m sorry you lost Cliff. I’m glad you’re here.

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Jimmy Doom's avatar

Thanks. He made my band and life better for a lot of years.

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Patris's avatar

I understand the title now.

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Carol Angel's avatar

Good to know...

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Lorraine Evanoff's avatar

This is so vivid. Great story.

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Jimmy Doom's avatar

Thanks Lorraine. I've been there. Not exactly, but close.

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Lorraine Evanoff's avatar

That's why you're writings so great.

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Joe's avatar

Interesting perspective.

The bit about the lights in the florist shop was excellent writing.

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Jimmy Doom's avatar

Thanks J/S. I thought that kind of set it apart too.

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