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Beevil's avatar

So much wrapped up in such a few moments

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Jimmy Doom's avatar

Always the goal. I don't wanna take readers on a long river skate

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Patris's avatar

So good but what a punch to the heart.

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Jimmy Doom's avatar

Thanks Patris. My heart was a little wonky while typing

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Joe's avatar

You continue to write amazing stories day after day!

For a man who puts out a fresh story each day, the quality of each one continues to amaze.

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Jimmy Doom's avatar

Thanks. I truly appreciate that a d I'm very grateful for the continued support

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Scott P Eckley's avatar

This is just so goog.

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Scott P Eckley's avatar

Good...

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Jimmy Doom's avatar

Thanks. I wasn't sure if people were going to like this one but I couldn't stop

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Jim Cummings's avatar

Oh shit, that is just so good. Tears in the eyes poetic. Damn it Jimmy!

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Jimmy Doom's avatar

Thanks Jim. That one had to come out of me before I could write anything else.

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Dyana's avatar

Beautifully written! That ending gutted me. Wow.

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Jimmy Doom's avatar

Thanks. I was in a mood and I guess I brought everyone along for that ride

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Carol Angel's avatar

Oh so many crochet words to make this a vivid encounter on the day’s calendar...love this, dynamic pre and post meeting...so good

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Jimmy Doom's avatar

Thanks Carol!

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Kate's avatar

It's wonderful. I loved it.

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