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Great ending. Those ladies and the priest. Oh boy! Sunday morning Mass should be interesting.

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May 21, 2022Liked by Jimmy Doom

That’s great. Reminded me of when “The Office” went topless for awhile. Thanks fully it didn’t burn down or Carl would never have taught me how to shoot a three-rail shot.

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The progression of this story was so, so well paced. You've got serious skills, Doom.

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May 21, 2022Liked by Jimmy Doom

Joubert Community…hometown love for the Judge.

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May 21, 2022Liked by Jimmy Doom

I did not know where this was going; that made it a great ride. I was focusing my attention on Lurch, and he turned out to be more of a catalyst. So we’ll done. I need to know for my visual; when you say suspenders, are you referring the British or American definition?

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I liked the ensuing chaos from punching the priest and how the energy just followed Nate into the bar and spread like wildfire.

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