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Joe's avatar

Great ending. Those ladies and the priest. Oh boy! Sunday morning Mass should be interesting.

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Jimmy Doom's avatar

Thanks Joe!

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Patrick K.'s avatar

That’s great. Reminded me of when “The Office” went topless for awhile. Thanks fully it didn’t burn down or Carl would never have taught me how to shoot a three-rail shot.

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Meg Vannelli's avatar

The progression of this story was so, so well paced. You've got serious skills, Doom.

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Jimmy Doom's avatar

Keeping the pace was one of the bigger challenges. Glad it worked for you.

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Todd Wilkerson's avatar

Joubert Community…hometown love for the Judge.

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Jimmy Doom's avatar

So glad you caught that

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V Moire's avatar

I did not know where this was going; that made it a great ride. I was focusing my attention on Lurch, and he turned out to be more of a catalyst. So we’ll done. I need to know for my visual; when you say suspenders, are you referring the British or American definition?

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Jimmy Doom's avatar

I'm going to guess, with my limited knowledge of anatomy and law that they would have to be American style and not traditional British braces.

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V Moire's avatar

That’s not my question: are they the British definition of “suspenders “., this is all making me come across as creepy, but I’m in this now.

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Jimmy Doom's avatar

I know what Americans call suspenders the British call braces .I guess you might mean garters. I meant actual American suspenders going from waistline over breasts, and if I'm not mistaken, that was a look for the staff of a lesser chain of American "eateries".

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Aaron Smith's avatar

I liked the ensuing chaos from punching the priest and how the energy just followed Nate into the bar and spread like wildfire.

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