that was for me reminiscent of the feeling i get reading some s. king stories. the mixture of psychological realism with radical events. i dont know if you are a fan or if you hate to be compared to other writers but its a compliment from me, for sure. im early enough in reading your stories to not have developed a sense for your personal style. thats part of the fun 🙂
You know when you can read an excerpt of a novel on Amazon or other online book vendors and when you can’t wait to click to buy? That’s this. I’m all in. I want to be with the woman who flies her butterfly kite.
Wow, Jimmy.
How you do this is beyond me.
I have been reading you daily now, for over three years, and have been surprised every. single. day.
This story felt cathartic.
I sincerely hope this story helps someone.
Stunning. That’s all I can say..
Nope, also
Visceral
You surely make me want to help her. And hope that she someday feel fully free.
Wow! Is right, I hung on to the very end. Perhaps a movie…?
I love this one. As Patris said, visceral.
I admire you for being able to write a story every single day. 👏🏻
Chilling. Disturbing. Hopeful.
I've never read a duff one yet Jimmy...im sure there must be ONE thats meh in 1200 but im fucked if i've found it yet.
and this surely isnt it.
Personally I don't know how you do it.
The kite appears to be a relic of the experience that she can never be free of. Trauma is forever.
that was for me reminiscent of the feeling i get reading some s. king stories. the mixture of psychological realism with radical events. i dont know if you are a fan or if you hate to be compared to other writers but its a compliment from me, for sure. im early enough in reading your stories to not have developed a sense for your personal style. thats part of the fun 🙂
I don’t mind comparisons. Because I publish every day I purposely change styles sometimes. I know my voice well so I don’t mind stepping out of it
You know when you can read an excerpt of a novel on Amazon or other online book vendors and when you can’t wait to click to buy? That’s this. I’m all in. I want to be with the woman who flies her butterfly kite.
This, right here, is one of those pieces. Nice work, Jimmy.