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Joe's avatar

How you do this every day is beyond me.

The vivid imagery using minimal verbiage, yet I am there. Thinking. Hearing. Watching. Listening.

Few words; but enough.

Another solid.

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Chevanne Scordinsky's avatar

Interesting, kind of gross, visceral, and in that style of painted scenery I really like.

The repetition of the question and answer is great cadence and I enjoyed that the whole act of smoking another’s discarded cigarette is like kissing.

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