Oh, the agony and the empathy in this one! You captured the simple ways that we try to help--a ride, a meal, comfort offered to someone in pain-- sometimes the results are like a storybook and other times are not what we hope. Thank you for the emotional roller coaster this morning.
My childhood neighborhood, the Kcar reference, your subtle reveal of the pain inside both characters. It’s a good thing I’m not one of those women who is dog obsessed or I’d be a puddle right now. So very well done.
Thanks Brian. I hope you love hundreds of the stories in the archive. But if you read some you don't like as much, feel free to tell me. I'm sensitive but not shy.
There’s a family member of mine that is currently dating an alcoholic. Before they met, this woman got a house and $20,000 in a divorce. She then lost the house and had to file for bankruptcy because she drank all her money. Skip an X amount of years and my family member starts dating her, helps pay off her debts, starts paying for most of her rent when they begin living together, and he gives her money in the hopes that it will help kickstart her savings.
Has this woman used any of this to turn her life around? Nope. Not only is she almost broke again, she has begun buying more expensive alcohol because she’s not paying as much on rent and other things anymore. My family member has offered multiple times to take her to AA meetings but she keeps making excuses as to why she can’t go. They’re probably going to break up soon.
You can try your best, but you really can’t help people who don’t want to change.
Hi Jimmy, Many thanks for your reply, and do not worry my fellow writer, I am sure that we will not always agree with what is good and bad, the main thing is that we can tell each in a respectful manner.
Ooof......good one! That hit hard on some memories!! Nice visualization. Thank you.
I woke to write it and it kept me awake thinking about it.
Oh, the agony and the empathy in this one! You captured the simple ways that we try to help--a ride, a meal, comfort offered to someone in pain-- sometimes the results are like a storybook and other times are not what we hope. Thank you for the emotional roller coaster this morning.
I promise I rode it with you, not strapped in.
Wow. Apt title, woven in three ways.
I'm glad. I didn't wanna wreck or diminish it with a bad title. I know I've done it in the past.
Appetite for self destruction. Well done.
Thank you. Millions of people have that trait.
Damn!!!
The effed up part is I know there probably aint enough fiction in this story.
Only tiny bits are factual/personal experience.
My childhood neighborhood, the Kcar reference, your subtle reveal of the pain inside both characters. It’s a good thing I’m not one of those women who is dog obsessed or I’d be a puddle right now. So very well done.
I was puddly when I wrote it
The weatherstripping is the win for me.
Thanks. I kinda knew Morver would do that. He isn't a " tissue" type of guy.
you’re the dog, AND you’re the car
That part of it hit me at about Lumpkin and Caniff as I was going to the party store.
Wowsa. That’s a tough story.
I had to write it. I had to.
Too true. Too true.
Craisman may not appreciate Morver, but he's got a true friend.
Excellent story, Jimmy!
Someone will read this and it will help.
Thanks Joe. Maybe I'll repost on Twitter with some tags
I loved every minute of reading it! You have a way with prose Jimmy that I admire greatly!!
Thanks Brian. I hope you love hundreds of the stories in the archive. But if you read some you don't like as much, feel free to tell me. I'm sensitive but not shy.
There’s a family member of mine that is currently dating an alcoholic. Before they met, this woman got a house and $20,000 in a divorce. She then lost the house and had to file for bankruptcy because she drank all her money. Skip an X amount of years and my family member starts dating her, helps pay off her debts, starts paying for most of her rent when they begin living together, and he gives her money in the hopes that it will help kickstart her savings.
Has this woman used any of this to turn her life around? Nope. Not only is she almost broke again, she has begun buying more expensive alcohol because she’s not paying as much on rent and other things anymore. My family member has offered multiple times to take her to AA meetings but she keeps making excuses as to why she can’t go. They’re probably going to break up soon.
You can try your best, but you really can’t help people who don’t want to change.
You sure can't. My drummer just died of it. We tried to help him. Modern medicine tried to help him. He refused.
Hi Jimmy, Many thanks for your reply, and do not worry my fellow writer, I am sure that we will not always agree with what is good and bad, the main thing is that we can tell each in a respectful manner.