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Patrick K.'s avatar

Had to read it twice to get the nuance (I’m only on my second coffee). Then I had to read it the third time to really see how you built the story. “Ice cream man in a den of snipers” is brilliant.

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V Moire's avatar

Brilliant. I guess corporate douchers may have a conscience--it just takes tragedy for them to access it.

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Patty Mallett's avatar

And me? I wonder what happened to the bunny.

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Carol Angel's avatar

If we are judged by our associates then Calhoun was guilty, he realized his situation was a dead end...

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Justin Deming's avatar

Agree with what Patrick said above - some brilliant lines in this story! Thanks Jimmy.

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Joe's avatar

Legal vs the mirror.

Excellent story.

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V. C. Ackerman's avatar

Calhorn deserved better.

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Winston Malone's avatar

Wasn’t prepared for that. Dang. Great job, Jimmy!

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Jimmy Doom's avatar

Thanks. I try to take the ride to unexpected places.

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