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The abyss is not just in the depths of an ocean.

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My brother told me once if you can visualize it, you can do it.

Adleigh already has the visual.

I hope she keeps moving forward on her dream of being a nurse.

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Apr 23Liked by Jimmy Doom

Dig it.

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ONE O YOUR BEST. A BIG HIT. AND A FINE BLOW AGAINST DULL DUM DUM LINEAR ASTORY TELLING. did you ever read Ken kesey' Sometimes A Great Notion. There's a clobbeing scene towardsthend where two brothers have an epic slugout. Your work todays reminds me of it.

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Ryder…hmmm…sounds like a romantic guy.

Must have been my cousin.

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Apr 23Liked by Jimmy Doom

I sure could feel that one. I hope she gets out, but for some reason I don’t think she will.

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i'm immediately reminded of my small hometown in michigan. these characters/their experiences are perpetual and timeless.

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Oof. Good luck getting to the end of this one with an unbruised spirit.

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Apr 27Liked by Jimmy Doom

Looking out the window of a plane at night, especially flying over some of the sparsely populated western states, I imagine the private lives going on in each lit window. The individual tiny but all encompassing dramas. Hundreds of tempests in hundreds of teacups.

Thats what your writing is like to me, Jimmy.

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