We get to see part of Rake's story from two different eyes.
I'm guessing Rake got shot either as a bodyguard or a hitman.
The Sailor piece is touching. Rake still cares about his first love. I got the feeling if the crazed fan wasn't already taken care of, he would have tried to leave the hospital.
True love. It’s no joke, and it’s forever.
This didn't start as a love piece. Don't know how it got there, but it did.
This is a very interesting piece.
We get to see part of Rake's story from two different eyes.
I'm guessing Rake got shot either as a bodyguard or a hitman.
The Sailor piece is touching. Rake still cares about his first love. I got the feeling if the crazed fan wasn't already taken care of, he would have tried to leave the hospital.
This one is a lot to noodle on.
Nice job.
Thanks. Somewhere along the line the love story developed. That wasnt the intent when I started writing.
Interesting piece, and interesting perspective. I want to know more about Rake now.
I know a few guys like Rake. Most of em are dead.
Okay, I really like this one.
This one might make the next book
This is really good… compelling… fantastic rhythm and voice.
It's one of my favorites. But you were supposed to be critical 😎
one of the freshest pieces I've read in a good while