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Riley really saw something...

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Wow! and I'm not a believer.

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That was a GREAT ending!

Man, you nailed this one!

I'm still laughing!

Gotta remember this one for the next campfire with the little kids.

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This one has me wanting so much more. Incredible

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Where are the fish! Fun story, I’m wanting to know the full story!❤️

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IT'S SLIGHTLY UNCLEAR AND TOO MUCH DESCRPTION GETS IN THE WAY OF TH STORY'S MOVMENT AND THE CLARITY OF THE NARRATOR WHO IS SOMEWHAT UNSURE AND FUZZY IN ITS OWN WRITE. BUT IM TIREED I APOLOGIZE. ILLREAD IT AGAIN WHEN IM NOT SO WORN OUT

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I'm gonna start calling these comments " Getting BrillCreamed"

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i. Do you know the Brill Cream song, as first sung in a duet with Pat Boone and Big Mama Thornton?

2. Truth be told, bro', Wildroot is better (less oily for when your sweetheart puts her hand(s) through your hair(s).

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I've never heard the original song. I just know the slogan "A little dab'll do ya"

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