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Patty Mallett's avatar

A fun loop of activity. (Punctuated by “I hate you.”) Nicely done.

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Jimmy Doom's avatar

Fun. Hate. It's all there.

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V Moire's avatar

A little painful. That’s part of what made it so good. I know nothing about golf, but I could still feel it.

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Jimmy Doom's avatar

There's golf, then there's charity Scramble golf. I love them both

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Luke's avatar

Nice use of humor on a tough subject.

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Jimmy Doom's avatar

Thanks. I think a writer has to give a reader a release valve most of the time. Not all. But most.

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Joe's avatar

You crack me up.

Another great story with a hilarious ending.

You skewered a couple sacred cows on this one!

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Jimmy Doom's avatar

I love to wield a skewer. And skew a wielder. Thanks for the comments Joe. They really keep me going.

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Elizabeth Stevens's avatar

I hate you. For being such a great writer.

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Jimmy Doom's avatar

I hate me for a couple things, but not that.

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Elizabeth Stevens's avatar

Healthy mental outlook my friend!

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Jimmy Doom's avatar

I just posted your review. I hid your name. It's like the opposite of making up names of girls I said I kissed at summer camp.

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