Sun and Knives

[Lorraine Evanoff]

More great character names and imagery.

The "prepackaged meal" did not disappoint💙

[Jimmy Doom]

Thanks Lorraine. I'm really happy you like them.

[Joe]

Fascinating study on an ugly subject.

The perspective of the two aggressors was quite disconcerting and it took me a bit to figure out what I was observing.

Yardie - the name tells all.

Your excellent writing skills step up another notch!

[Jimmy Doom]

Thanks J/S. This one evolved and I love where it went

[Dirk Flanigan]

Love it man!

[Patris]

How the frenzy turned into philosophy I wasn’t sure until the wheelchair moved. So good, J.

[Jimmy Doom]

Thanks. 2nd one in 3.5 years I wrote in my car in the casino parking structure.

[Patty Mallett]

“Yardie wheeled over to the knife.” Wow.

[Jimmy Doom]

Very happy you like it. You know I love " wow"

[Carol Angel]

Yay Lions, Congrats.

Excellent story telling!

[Jimmy Doom]

This was written blocks from Ford Field

[Clancy Steadwell]

Thank you, Jimmy.

[Jimmy Doom]

Thanks for taking the time to read it

[Zelmo of Troy]

Four stars on this one, Citizen Doom.

[Jimmy Doom]

I hope the scale goes no higher than five