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Sep 24, 2021Liked by Jimmy Doom

Nice.

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Sep 24, 2021Liked by Jimmy Doom

Wow. Great opening lines. Great turned tables at the end.

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Sep 24, 2021Liked by Jimmy Doom

I loved this one. A riveting story. I’m not much of a plot person, but this was satisfying, yet left me wanting more. I was genuinely fearful it was going to end at 100 words and leave me hanging.

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