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Patty Mallett's avatar

Nice.

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Patrick K.'s avatar

Wow. Great opening lines. Great turned tables at the end.

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V Moire's avatar

I loved this one. A riveting story. I’m not much of a plot person, but this was satisfying, yet left me wanting more. I was genuinely fearful it was going to end at 100 words and leave me hanging.

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Jimmy Doom's avatar

I wanted Jack to see his true love one last time. But I knew that he was too proud to show up in person without a wad of money.

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