Really enjoyed the development of the characters and the town and the voice in which you wrote. Nicely tied together with a bit of the gut punch I’ve come to appreciate.
Brilliantly executed. The fantasy we all have, from time to time, to close ourselves off in an idyllic environment with only the people we love. You made it seem at once beautifully possible and frighteningly necessary.
Really enjoyed the development of the characters and the town and the voice in which you wrote. Nicely tied together with a bit of the gut punch I’ve come to appreciate.
Brilliantly executed. The fantasy we all have, from time to time, to close ourselves off in an idyllic environment with only the people we love. You made it seem at once beautifully possible and frighteningly necessary.
I love the voice of this story. You took me straight into the mind and memory of a Meldana local. Well-done.
Thanks! Today's story will be late because I have a driving gig and because it's 4000 words