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V Moire's avatar

Oh, this is wonderful Jimmy. I felt like I could see the art all around the space that you didn’t even describe. That which you did describe was vivid AF.

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Jimmy Doom's avatar

Stoked and relieved that you like it. It was a gear switch to go first person, then I switched gears without stepping on the clutch mid story.

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V Moire's avatar

You’re a regular Flaubert

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Jimmy Doom's avatar

I'm a husky Flaubert

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Douglas Holmes's avatar

Love this one. It just works…

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Patty Mallett's avatar

Wow.

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Jimmy Doom's avatar

Love that

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jodi mackleyberger's avatar

It's so real. Vikki is right on--I can see it. And it gives me the feels. I keep re-reading it because of how I feel in the pit of my stomach or heart? hm. Just lovely.

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Jimmy Doom's avatar

I love that. Thank you. Makes me picture putting the needle back on the groove of songs that captured me.

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Jim Latham's avatar

Nice one, Jimmy.

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Jimmy Doom's avatar

Thanks

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