Very creepy. Very cool. Touches on that fear we all have these days, as we walk around with wiretap devices in our pockets, who's paying attention. Great job.
So glad you like this one. I entered it in a contest and it didn't even come within sniffing distance of a prize. You just awarded me a prize. Thank you
This one was for a Substack contest. I didn't win, but it was fun to write.
Haven't read a yarn like this one in years!
I can only imagine how much fun you had writing it.
Had me wondering about acronyms, anagrams, conspiracies, interpersonal relations, clubs, etc.
You certainly gave us a Billy from 'Family Circus' wander about the area!
Thanks. I submitted it for an award so I don't know how much more I'm allowed to say in the comments.
👁️👁️ You can say anything you like... I'm watching, aaaalways watching.
Hahaha hahaha
Excellent. I really enjoyed this one. In fact, I think I will read it again!
Creepy!
That’s a good Black Mirror plot.
Mouse at end was pretty obviously designed
for the big scream. Mystery was supposed to be fresh but was movie stale. Same old same old. 1950’s black and white.
But Rosalind didn't scream.
Yes. Basically, nothing happened.
I'm not going to dissect the story for you. Sorry you didn't like it, but something absolutely did happen.
Feeling like I wandered into the twilight zone...enjoyed this story.
Very creepy. Very cool. Touches on that fear we all have these days, as we walk around with wiretap devices in our pockets, who's paying attention. Great job.
And straight from fiction to reality, someone's Arris modem started encroaching my wi/fi tonight
Ominous theremin music starts playing
And all of a sudden there's a fog machine where the microwave used to be
Thanks. Stoked you like it
So much happening--it’s hard to keep track, so it whirled me in.
Okay, the “Rodent” thing was kinda freaky, but in a fun way. Good one!!!
wow! what an endless wow of words
A horror.
Wow. Quite a fun and creepy ride.
I think a few of my exes have said that about our relationships.
Wow. I was on the edge of my seat the whole time. Now I really want to know….
Epic tale
"Would the poor quality of the scarves be her undoing?"
It's always the scarves.
HOLY COW!!!?
I’ve had a hard time reading fiction lately but maybe the trick is just to start something you absolutely cannot put down
So glad you like this one. I entered it in a contest and it didn't even come within sniffing distance of a prize. You just awarded me a prize. Thank you