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Jim Hebler's avatar

Excellent story, Jimmy. You humanize real challenges, issues and strange real-world realities superbly. I know you're sometimes frustrated that you want to sell more and gain more subscribers; I get it. However, as a writer myself - I want to take the time to share with you how excellent your work is - this one is a gem - and how much I'm enjoying my subscription. Will see you soon. JAH

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Molly Graham's avatar

Your characters are so real. I feel for them.

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scottyG's avatar

This ^^ I was literally coming here to say how real the characters are. Totally believable. I really want to know more of this story. I really want to know more about Amber.

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Beevil's avatar

No eyes on the ‘Tuna dolls is very sad

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Douglas Holmes's avatar

I don’t know what to say, Jimmy, other than that’s a hell of a good story.

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Justin Deming's avatar

Loved it, Jimmy.

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Joe's avatar

Your writing of reality is frighteningly realistic.

Excellent story telling it like it is.

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Mary's avatar

Great detail on the toys with no eyes. Truthful.

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Luke's avatar

Loved this one. These people are real.

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Patty Mallett's avatar

Really nice, Jimmy. Sad.

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Kim Van Dyke's avatar

As the owner of a Mary created doll, I agree.

This story made my heart ache.

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