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Molly Graham's avatar

This one is definitely a winner. "Pharmacy quality pinot grigio" and so many more evocative lines.

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Melissa Walsh's avatar

“that guttural laugh like someone sinking bricks in pudding”

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Patty Mallett's avatar

…”her fingers didn’t need stilettos to dance.” Great line.

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Jimmy Doom's avatar

I'm super stoked this one worked

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Melissa Walsh's avatar

I love love love this one!

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Jimmy Doom's avatar

I'm glad you love it. Wish I could find more people who would love it too

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