Adolescence
That one hits the gut with a little bit of a punch... which is more than fine.
Thanks. You can take a punch
I was left wanting more and I appreciated how much of Brad you could shatter in so few words.
Doing those 100 worders really helped with the word economy. Glad you dig it
Memorable. Beautiful little slice of life and death.
Trying to keep them memorable. Thanks.
This is very raw. I like that you can get a feel for the kind of town the characters live in and lives they have just by the way their children act. God, just… ouch. Great work.
Ouch is a wonderful compliment. Thank you.
Hung around some gang cops years ago and was shocked at how naive some parents are regarding the activity of their charges.
I know mine knew I was a troublemaker, just not the degree.
Nice way to not be obvious about what is going on at first. Then it all becomes clear, painfully so. Well done Jimmy.
Thanks Tony. I try hard not to telegraph most of them.
Ominous. I don't have children. Thank you for reminding me of at least one good reason I don't.
Parenthood is definitely a bigger minefield than people give it credit for.
That one hits the gut with a little bit of a punch... which is more than fine.
Thanks. You can take a punch
I was left wanting more and I appreciated how much of Brad you could shatter in so few words.
Doing those 100 worders really helped with the word economy. Glad you dig it
Memorable. Beautiful little slice of life and death.
Trying to keep them memorable. Thanks.
This is very raw. I like that you can get a feel for the kind of town the characters live in and lives they have just by the way their children act. God, just… ouch. Great work.
Ouch is a wonderful compliment. Thank you.
Hung around some gang cops years ago and was shocked at how naive some parents are regarding the activity of their charges.
I know mine knew I was a troublemaker, just not the degree.
Nice way to not be obvious about what is going on at first. Then it all becomes clear, painfully so. Well done Jimmy.
Thanks Tony. I try hard not to telegraph most of them.
Ominous. I don't have children. Thank you for reminding me of at least one good reason I don't.
Parenthood is definitely a bigger minefield than people give it credit for.