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Jan 30, 2021Liked by Jimmy Doom

great story. great insights.

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That one came out like someone shook up a can of beer and dropped it on the floor

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Jan 30, 2021Liked by Jimmy Doom

I smelled tequila - I felt ice crystals of an overly cold domestic swill abasing the back of my throat as Chuck guzzled his - and I remembered my teenage diffidence

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I love poetic responses

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Jan 30, 2021Liked by Jimmy Doom

Great one, Jimmy

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It was the product of a real life collision between someone on Twitter asking me if I'd print my real phone number in a story ( Bukowski did ) and a pretty girl posting QOTSA " Go With the Flow"

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Jan 30, 2021Liked by Jimmy Doom

From reading it, I figured there was some interesting inspiration.

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Thanks for reminding me to share it with the inspirers.

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Jan 31, 2021Liked by Jimmy Doom

I love this one!

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Thanks. I kinda took a bit of a chunk from my own life, but it's fiction.

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hell yeah jimmy, hell yeah. nice one.

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Thanks Jim!

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Beautiful. I remember that guy.

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