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Wow!

That was an awesome story.

Totally unexpected, totally different genre, totally different arena of interest for the reader.

It began with the very curious title.

The sub-title seemed innocuous.

The cannoli, and the way she had him going showed top drawer experience.

The unanswered question kept this exciting.

Integrating the thumb story was pure genius!

And once again, the prestige; just like Francesca's creation - a fantastic closing!

I've read a lot of your stories, Jimmy, and some are incredible.

This one is absolute pulchritude - definitely one of the greatest shorts ever.

Congratulations on a Mega WOW!

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Apr 16Liked by Jimmy Doom

Adding this to my list of favorite stories you've written. Fun read!

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Nailed him. Good.

Very satisfying and the details are as always wonderful, foreign shores, appendages lost notwithstanding.

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This is a classic.

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Apr 16Liked by Jimmy Doom

Jimmy always delivers

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Noice. Wondering how this new agency works -- there's a business idea!

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I like to save reading your stories for times that life is a struggle. It's my reward for not giving up. This one was a keeper.

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